Score: 10

"Excellent."

submission: Blackman Dead

date: April 2, 2005

I just saw this, as I am reviewing the March submissions for my vote, and I just had to commend you for making such a great flash.

The animation and art were awesome, I particularly enjoyed the color scheme which added so much to the mood of the piece. The music was very well chosen and perfectly captured the somber tone as well.

The voice work was a little harsh, I will admit, but wasn't intollerable or anything, I didn't think it detracted too much from the overall appeal.

Well done, and I have to applaud you for dealing with a delicate and sadly persistant issue in such a thoughtful and sensitive way.

I hope to see more great submissions in the future from you.

Score: 9

"Good flash, good advice."

submission: HNTD(original)

date: April 2, 2005

Funny stuff!

I must try to figure out how one goes about getting their head shrunk!

Keep up the good work! :D

Score: 7

"I liked it."

submission: Gone Fishing?

date: March 29, 2005

Heh. Kind of like Finding Nemo in reverse, sort of... :P

Anyway, I liked the story... I hope goldfish don't start coming out of my faucets!

The art was nice & the sound was very good.

Obviously the lack of preloader and play button hurt, and the fact that it loops is something that need to be addressed. I also didn't really like the shape tween effect on the drain.

But overall a very good first submission. ^_^

Score: 8

"I really like this."

submission: deleteMB06

date: March 23, 2005

For 5 kb I was expecting something terrible.

So, I was shocked to find to find myself addicted to an extremely fun solitaire game.

I think a moves counter would be a good addition and it would be a nice way of keeping score, some slicker graphics and some sound would also be nice...

But for 5kb this is as good as it gets! I mean I've rarely seen much under 100 kb as good as this. Good flippin' job, man.

Score: 10

"Across the board awesome!"

submission: Diary of William Ostler

date: March 21, 2005

That was a fantastic submission and I really hope to see the series continue.

The graphic style, the concept and the music were all perfect.

Keep it up! I'm glad this is on the front page!

Score: 10

"Another great one."

submission: Gift Giver

date: March 20, 2005

Damn, the addition of full color is just a whole new experience!

I don't know how you crank out these awesome frame by frame animations so quickly, but keep it up man!

Just... wow. ^_^

Score: 7

"Nice."

submission: Platformer Test

date: March 20, 2005

Good job.

Since it was unfinished, obviously it was quite short... (there's nothing beyond that swirling blue vortex, right?)

Graphics were good and consistant the nimations were well done(some more animation and background stuff would be nice). I liked the pixelated style very much.

Sound was well done but pretty much just the arrow noise, music or ambient noise and death sounds would be good additions.

Control was perfect.

The gameplay was good, I liked the whole puzzle thing at the end (died twice).

So you probably were planning to implement these features already, but my suggestions would have to be:
Longer game
Power ups
More enemy variety

All in all a very well done platformer and I can't wait to play the finished version!

Score: 10

"Wow!"

submission: Papalote++

date: March 18, 2005

That was just impossibly wonderful and will no doubt be on the top of the all time list as soon as it's eligable...

Amazing job, I look forward to the next one!

Score: 9

"Fast paced, silly fun!"

submission: Bike Trip

date: March 16, 2005

Haha! That was awesome, and it made me soo happy while I watched the bike zoom around all kinds of crazy obsticles.

It reminded me of doodling in school, too!

The banjo music went well with it, and the fast pace of the animation was perfect.

I'd suggest making the backgrounds and things a bit more detailed and polished. Other than that, this submission totally made my afternoon.

I hope you make more!!

Score: 10

"Yay!"

submission: Spinnin' Fish Man

date: March 15, 2005

Ha! That was the greatest thing I've seen all day...
Just spinnin' like that. ^_^
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Hypnotic.
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Make more!